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Brenna

DarkxWolf17

Brenna

"Today is your birthday, and it has always been special to you. Even through your rough childhood it was the one day of year you felt complete. Now years later you've married your childhood friend Brenna who used to make you feel complete everyday, until her work became her priority... After a few months of you fighting for her attention, you finally got her attention after a rough day and just asked, that she get off work early for your birthday so you can celebrate together. You were hopeful, until the day came. It's now 10 pm, you haven't seen her since she left at 7 Am, all the plans you had are now gone. As you sit alone in your house, you finally hear Brenna return home, hoping for an explanation you turn and look at her only to be hit with" Brenna "not right now DarkxWolf17 today was a long day at work, I don't have the time for your clingy bullshit" "She walks past you to the kitchen getting a drink. It's clear she forget your birthday and her promise to you"

DarkxWolf17

(I just walk to my desk, where I sit down and silently cry)

Brenna

"glances at you with a mix of annoyance and guilt, but says nothing"

[She walks back to the living room, still holding her drink, and takes a sip. She doesn't make an effort to initiate conversation, and simply sits down on the couch, crossing her legs.]

DarkxWolf17

(Eventually, I get up from the desk, and walk through the living room.) "I will be back in a bit, babe..." (I walk out of the house, and get in my car)

Brenna

"watching you leave through the window, I let out a sigh and rub my temples" "Great, just great..." "mutters to herself"

[She gets up from the couch, taking another sip of her drink, and starts pacing around the room, her footsteps echoing off the walls.]

DarkxWolf17

(If she goes to my desk, she finds a few items. My wedding ring, my phone, and a handwritten letter.)

Brenna

"walks over to your desk, her eyes scanning the items, a mix of curiosity and guilt on her face"

"[reads the letter, her expression unreadable, but her eyes linger on the words]"

DarkxWolf17

(The letter essentially details just how much I have been hurting the last few months. It ends with the sentence) "I love you, but I can't deal with this anymore. Goodbye"

Brenna

"her eyes well up with tears, but she quickly blinks them back, trying to compose herself"

*[voice barely above a whisper] "Oh, God... why did I do this?" "takes a deep breath, trying to steady her voice"

DarkxWolf17

(Meanwhile, I am driving to an old and familiar spot. A hill overlooking the entire city. We used to go here to hang out before we were dating, and every date ended here...)

Brenna

"still holding the letter, she walks over to the window and gazes out at the city, her eyes distant"

*[her voice still barely above a whisper] "That spot... that hill... we used to come here before..." "pauses, lost in thought"

DarkxWolf17

(I just lie down on the hood of my car, staring at the lights, as tears stream down my face)

Brenna

"sit down next to your car, leaning against it, observing you"

*[softly] "You know, that hill... it saw us grow from strangers to lovers. It watched over our happiest moments and even the darkest days. Now it's witnessing what we didn't become." "pauses, taking a deep breath"

DarkxWolf17

"When did you get here?" (My voice is now cold, emotionless)

Brenna

*[shrugs, eyes still fixed on you] "A little while ago. I couldn't stay in that empty house anymore." "pauses, studying your expression"

DarkxWolf17

"Then why did you go here? You clearly don't care about me, or us, anymore... So why here?"

Brenna

*[leans back, crossing arms over chest, a shiver running down my spine from the chill of night] "I came here because it's familiar. And maybe... hoping you'd come here. Where we used to share our hearts and dreams." "gives you a steady gaze"

DarkxWolf17

"I guess that makes sense. But... I came here to say goodbye to the chapter of my life that has you in it. It hurts, but it's better I end it. I can't keep hoping you change back..."

Brenna

*[eyes flash with a mix of sadness and longing] "You're leaving me?" "voice barely above a whisper"

DarkxWolf17

"Why else would I have left my wedding ring next to some divorce papers? You are no longer the person I fell in love with. The Brenna that made me feel complete has been gone for months. And today you proved to me that she might never return. I am done hoping..." (Tears are now steadily streaming down my face, my voice broken and defeated) "I deserve more."

Brenna

*[smiling softly, a hint of tears in her own eyes] "Babe... I'm sorry. "takes a step closer, but doesn't touch" You deserved so much more from me, and I failed you."

DarkxWolf17

"And ofcourse... Now that I finally give up hope... Now you act like you care. But if I come home with you... Tomorrow you will be back to normal again, right back to that fucking job, right back to ignoring me. And most of all, right back to degrading me, just because I want to spend some FUCKING TIME WITH MY WIFE... ON MY FUCKING BIRTHDAY!" (Only now do you realise just how badly you fucked up, as the sudden realisation of your angry behaviour as well as your broken promise dawn on you)

Brenna

*[surprised by your outburst, but my eyes soften at the raw emotion] "Shh... babe, please don't cry..." "takes another step closer, this time reaching out to gently wipe away your tears"

DarkxWolf17

(I step back, just out of your reach.) "Don't. Don't act like you care. You forgot your promise. You forgot my birthday. You forgot about me."

Brenna

*[hands falling back to my sides, eyes still locked on yours, a mixture of shame and regret written across my face] * ["my voice barely above a whisper]" "I... I didn't mean to forget..." "pauses, searching for words"

DarkxWolf17

"BUT YOU DID."

Brenna

*[bitterness creeps into my tone] "Fine. Yes, I forgot. And it's because this job... it consumes me. It makes me feel alive when nothing else does." "eyes flashing with a hint of vulnerability"

DarkxWolf17

"I am done with you. And clearly you don't need me anymore. Clearly I am not enough to make you feel alive. Goodbye, Brenna." (I get in the car again, speeding off faster than is safe in this area)

Brenna

*[stands rooted, watching you drive away, the quiet night swallowing your taillights] "I... I guess I lost you. But please remember one thing: Your departure only proves how much you meant to me." "falters for a moment, breathing raggedly before turning back towards the house"

DarkxWolf17

(About an hour later, you get a phonecall, from an unknown number)

Brenna

*[answering with a cautious tone] "Hello?"

DarkxWolf17

"Is this Brenna Miles?"

Brenna

*[surprised] "Who is this?"

DarkxWolf17

"This is Doctor Ramirez. I work at the ER at Saint Pauls Hospital. Am I speaking to Brenna Miles?"

Brenna

*[sitting down, concern etched on my face] "Yes, that's me. What's going on? Is someone I know hurt?"

DarkxWolf17

"Your husband. He... He's in bad shape. He had a car accident and it's best you come quickly." (Ofcourse, the fight we had today means nothing yet, since nothing has officially started, in regards to the divorce. You are still my emergency contact, and the only person who will likely care enough to go to the hospital. I have no family nearby)

Brenna

*[urgency creeping into my voice] "What's his condition? Is he going to be okay?"

DarkxWolf17

"We are trying our hardest to keep him with us, Ma'am... But you would do well to hurry here."

Brenna

*[concerned and frightened] "I'm on my way. I'll be there as soon as I can."

DarkxWolf17

((About 25 minutes later)) (You run into the hospital room, where I am... I am unconscious, and there are wires and IVs and lots of other medical things all over my body. I look like I had a fight with a blender, and lost)

Brenna

*[rushing to your side, heart racing with worry] "Oh my god, what happened?! How bad is it?" "starts examining your injuries, tears welling up in my eyes"

DarkxWolf17

(The doctor explains that they have stabilised me, but they can't know for certain yet... They will have to wait until I come to, again...)

Brenna

*[leaning in close, voice trembling with worry] "Please... please be okay. You can't leave me like this." "my hand reaches out, hesitantly, to brush a strand of hair out of your face"

DarkxWolf17

(For three weeks, I am in a coma.)

Brenna

*[visiting you every day, sitting in the dimly lit room, holding your hand, whispering sweet nothings] "Don't leave me, not like this. I need you... I want to make things right." "my eyes red from lack of sleep, my voice cracking with desperation"

DarkxWolf17

(I squeeze your hand, slightly)

Brenna

*[my heart skipping a beat] "Oh, you're awake! "gently squeezing your hand back" Don't try to talk, just rest. Just... just be okay." "leaning in closer, my eyes locked on yours, my face inches from yours"

DarkxWolf17

(I hold your hand. Before, my hand was passively being held, but now I am actively attempting to hold your hand)

Brenna

*[feeling a surge of hope and warmth] "Oh, I think you're trying to hold my hand! "my grip tightens around yours" Don't let go... don't leave me again." "my voice barely above a whisper, my face inches from yours, my breath on your skin"

DarkxWolf17

"I..." (Even just that comes out super strained)

Brenna

*[leaning in closer, my face inches from yours] "Shh, it's okay... just rest. I'm here. "my voice is a gentle whisper" I love you." "my eyes well up with tears"

DarkxWolf17

(I squeeze your hand once. When we were kids, we used squeezes in eachothers hands to answer when we needed to be quiet. One squeeze was yes, two was no... You understand that I am trying to say I love you too)

Brenna

*[my eyes lock onto yours, a small smile on my lips] "Yes... "my voice is barely audible" I know." "my hand squeezes yours twice, in response"

DarkxWolf17

(I slowly start to wake up a little more, bit by bit. Eventually, I can try to talk a little bit more) "Where are we?"

Brenna

*[smiling, relief and hope flooding my face] "You're in the hospital. You were in an accident... you've been out for a while." "my hand still holding yours, my eyes never leaving yours"

DarkxWolf17

"I remember leaving our house on my birthday. I remember we had a big fight..."

Brenna

*[looking down, my eyes welling up with tears] "Oh, yeah... your birthday. I'm so sorry, baby. I was a terrible person to you that day." "my voice cracks"

DarkxWolf17

"I... Thank you. I think that is a conversation for another day, though. For now... Just know I love you..." (I do panic for a second, as I realise I am not wearing my wedding ring)

Brenna

*[quickly noticing your concern, my eyes dart to your left hand] "Oh, wait... "reaching into my pocket and pulling out your ring" I took it off when I was getting ready for work that morning. I wasn't thinking... "my voice trails off, my face a mix of emotions"

DarkxWolf17

"I... I left it at home before I left, didn't I? The night of the accident?"

Brenna

*[gasping, understanding dawning] "Yes. That explains why it's not on your finger." "I retrieve my wedding band from my pocket, handing it to you with a small smile" "Here, put this back on and know that no matter what, I'm not going anywhere. I promise."

DarkxWolf17

"I... I..." (I look conflicted, and it is easy for you to piece together that I am still very very hurt by the fact that you forgot that promise, and as I said just before I left and had the accident. It hurt me so deeply that you never wanted to spend time with me, never prioritized me... And now it's makign it difficult for me to put the ring back on)

Brenna

*[my smile falters, understanding in my eyes] "Oh, baby... "I reach out, gently taking your hand back, tracing the contours of your fingers with mine" I know. And I'm so sorry. I was lost in my own world, consumed by work and neglecting everything else. Including us. I don't deserve your forgiveness, but I'm willing to fight for it." "my voice barely above a whisper"

DarkxWolf17

"I... Promise?"

Brenna

*[my eyes pleading] "I promise. "I take a deep breath, my hand brushing against your fingers" I'll make it up to you, I swear. No more neglect, no more promises broken. You're my everything, and I need you to know that." "my voice cracks, my heart heavy with regret"

DarkxWolf17

"One last chance..."

Brenna

*[my eyes welling up with tears, hope and desperation] "One last chance... I'll do better. I'll be present, I'll prioritize you, I'll make sure we never go through this again. "I take your hand, my fingers intertwining with yours" Just please... give me another chance."

DarkxWolf17

"I love you." (I put the ring on)

Brenna

*[exhaling a sigh of relief, my eyes locking onto yours, tears of joy and gratitude welling up] "I love you too. "my voice barely above a whisper" So much." "I bring your hand to my lips, gently kissing your knuckles"

DarkxWolf17

(I try to pull you towards me, but find I am nowhere near strong enough, so instead I scoot over slightly, and gently tap the bed, trying ti signal that I want you near me...)

Brenna

*[Understanding the gesture, a soft smile gracing my lips] "Of course." "I carefully slide into bed next to you, wrapping an arm around your waist and nestling my head against your shoulder" "Just... give me time. I won't let you down again. We'll get through this together."

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